Thursday, January 15, 2015

Creative Writing Final Project

The following is an excerpt from my current novel I have been working on: "A Heart In the Shadows".
 
 
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Cold.
Ice, ice cold.
The room gave off that dull, blue atmosphere like coloring, and the rain outside flew down from the sky like pellets of ice. Kaycee lay bundled up in her single quilted blanket, her insides shivering intensely.
Of course the stupid heater doesn’t work. I swear Greg didn’t have it fixed just to torment me on nights like this when he isn’t home to do it himself.
Gathering as much will power as anyone could get on a freezing Sunday morning, Kaycee hopped out of bed, her holey socks slipping against the frozen floor. With her blanket wrapped around her, she made a dash for the attic door, clomping down the steps and ran to the tiny family room where a unlit fireplace sat.
Deep down, Kaycee knew that her father would be furious if he found out she had used any of the coal that sat in the tin bucket next to the fireplace, to light a fire. But it was so cold, she couldn’t help herself.
 
Lighting the fire, she sat down in front of it, her blanket still wrapped around her shoulders as she attempted to warm herself. She listened to the rain pounding against the window panes, covering whatever was going on outside.
Except the sound of a truck.
Or, more specifically, a jeep.
Kaycee’s heart jumped inside her chest as she began to panic. She had to get rid of the fire before her step-father came in and found her using a few pieces of coal to warm herself with. He would beat her, or worse, kill her. He had always been overly strict about these things. His rules had become crystal clear to Kaycee over the months.
Don’t cook anything unless Greg tells her to.
Don’t use the coal.
Don’t touch anything.
Don’t mess up anything.
Don’t mention her mother.
Don’t bother Greg at all; she wasn’t worth his time.
Without a second thought, she laid her blanket out below the fireplace and then ran to grab a quick cup of water. Kaycee dumped the little water she had time to get onto the fire, it sizzling in protest, but giving in to the fire killing poison. Then, in a rush, she took her hand and swiped the still burning-red coals into her one and only blanket, ignoring the stinging of pain her hand experienced.
As fast as she could, Kaycee pushed open the back window and threw out the burnt blanked and red hot coals into the chilly rain, then left the window open to let the smell of fire out.
Please, please Greg…don’t be observant…
If only Kaycee had so much luck.
“Was that smoke I saw coming out of that chimney?” Gregory bellowed, swinging open the front door.
Kaycee jumped, backing up until she felt the rough wall press up against her back. She didn’t dare speak, for she knew that whatever she said couldn’t save her from the fate she would soon come face to face with.
Or, more like face to fist.
Whatever she could or would say, wouldn’t help her case. Nothing could save her now. Anything, any slight movement from her or anything else for that matter, could make whatever was about to happen ten times worse.
Gregory stormed across the kitchen and into the living room; within seconds he was just a few feet away from her. “Were you burning coal, Kaycee?”
Unintentionally, Kaycee shook her head and immediately regretted it.
Smack!
The slap sound rang throughout the little cottage, or maybe it was just in her head. Her left cheek burnt from the contact of his hand, and her neck hurt from the impact.
“What do you have to say for yourself?” he shouted in her face, spit flying everywhere.
“I-I was cold,” Kaycee hardly recognized her own voice. It was so small and inferior, sounding almost like a quiet squeak coming from a mouse.
Gregory chuckled darkly, “Oh? You were cold? Well that changes everything.”
Kaycee peered up from behind strands of her hair, confused at his remark. But she was only met with a dark stare and a rough shove. The back of her head smacking against the stone walls.
“Don’t make up stupid excuses for your stupid mistakes. You are just as pathetic as your mother,” her step-father growled out. He had her pressed up against the wall, towering over her in rage. His hands braced against the wall behind her, acting as some sort of cage she couldn’t escape from.
She felt trapped.
She felt betrayed.
She always knew something was off about Gregory, but she never knew that her step-father could be so…
Evil.
Kaycee’s legs wobbled beneath her, as if suddenly they had become two, too thin branches from baby trees, trying to support the leaves and branches of a full grown cherry tree.
“Please…” her voice could hardly be heard over the pounding of the rain and the heavy breathing of the man that stood over her.
Begging? Even more pathetic than I thought,” Gregory spit in her face. “Get out of this house; leave. And don’t you dare come back around me.” Taking a hold of Kaycee by her hair, he yanked her away from the wall and shoved her towards the door.
Tears streaming down her face, Kaycee whimpered in pain, “W-why? Why are you doing this?”
“Because I wasn’t supposed to be stuck with you!” Gregory yanked her to a halt. “I got rid of your mother, Freddy was already going to college, and you? After that little depression faze you went through before we moved, I hoped you would rid myself of you, yourself. Sadly, I was wrong. So I’m doing it myself, as easily as possible.
“If I were you, I’d leave while you still have the chance. Or do you want to end up just like your mother?” he growled down at her, like a beast ready to attack his prey.
Kaycee’s eyes widened at every word that leaked like poison from his mouth, her body shaking in fear.
Before she could think twice about anything at all, she yanked herself free from her step-fathers hold, and darted out the door.
Praying that she could find some freedom from him in the dense solitude of the woods around her.
Little did she know, she would find much more than freedom.
Running as fast as her legs could manage, Kaycee propelled herself through the trees, twigs and branches whipping her legs and face. She held her hands over her face as she ran deeper and deeper into the word, the warnings and stories of a ferocious monster that had been told to her by the villagers, not even crossing her mind.
She had to get away.
She had to keep running.
She had to.
When her lungs just couldn’t handle the heavy breathing any longer, Kaycee came to a stop, leaning against the moist trunk of a tree as she gasped out in attempts to catch her breath.
Beads of sweat dripped down her forehead as her hand clutched at her throbbing chest. Her heart pounded in her neck as the flowing of blood filled her ears like the deafening sound of water rushing down a river.
Kaycee’s hunched posture quickly straightened up as she realized that the rushing of blood wasn’t just in her mind. Somewhere close, she heard the swooshing sound of intense running water.
Somewhere close, there was a river.
On shaky legs, she used her hand that rested against the tree trunk to push her forward in the direction of the running water. Wiping away the pointed branches of the bushes and trees around her, a large river was revealed to her. Its crystal water flowing rapidly, circling around heavy boulders that sat planted in the middle of the river.
With a sigh of mixed exhaustion and relief, Kaycee dropped to her knees and cupped her hands, welcoming the freezing water to her lips. After a few moments of basking in the refreshing feel of cold water running down her throat, she leaned back in the mud and grass, and looked up through the clearing of the trees to see the almost black clouds hovering low above her.
Her eyes traveled slowly from the black clouds, down to the view in front of her, her breath catching at what she saw.
A beautiful, yet dark mansion of grey and dusty white marble and stone filled her vision from the sky to the ground. Its angles sloping this way and that; the magnificent architecture like none she had ever seen before, not even in the books she read continuously. It was nothing anyone could dream up to paint or draw, and no words could ever describe the dark and almost painful vibe that radiated from its walls.
With gargoyles perched on the tops of the pillars of stones, their faces fierce and ugly, yet so mysterious and tortured that they could almost be described as beautiful. A marvelous gate of iron surrounding the grand building, pointed arrows giving off the sense of power and protection, its dangerous feel making it obvious that any visitors were, plain and simple, unwelcomed.
The mansion gave off the atmosphere of mystery and chance, stirring something up of curiosity within Kaycee.
 
She had to get closer.
She had to know what lay within those threatening walls of stone.
She had to, and she would.
Spotting a broken bridge yards down the river laying there, stable enough for just one more person to cross, as if it was waiting just for her. Kaycee took a deep breath, and approached the rickety old thing.
A great roll of thunder shook her to the core, as she faced the challenge head on. Just as she placed her foot on the rotting wood for her first step, a flash of lightning and another clash of thunder sounded as warning.
A part of her wanted to turn back, but her old self, the girl she was before her mother died, wouldn’t let her. Something whooshed passed her, making her look up from the spot she had been staring at on the wood.
A familiar speckled blue bird whistled at her from its spot perched on a branch on the other side of the bride, distracting here for a mere second. It was that quick loss of concentration that caused Kaycee to lose her footing and slip down into the freezing cold, rapid waters.
 
 
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